Fake-deep writing or poetry never ceases to amaze me. It always uses the same tricks. For fake-deep writing, it's repetition of things "I used to believe (insert common belief held by most happy content people in the world)" followed by two line breaks and then a final even DEEPER phrase like "the shadow of the church falls over me like a dark shadowy shadow". For poetry, it's more line breaks and the words ashes, darkness, and soul. I don't want to read about your
soul, locked away
bird in an iron
cage
the color of ashes
no song left to sing.
Seriously.
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